All Comments on 'Lord Cuckold. A Poem. Part 1'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

well done but far too long- keep best lines and void the rest. Rings true1

TooSmallDaveTooSmallDaveabout 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks Anonymous. Sound advice. You're absolutely right. Will do

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I started writing stories about sex in 2020. Heaven's knows why; it's not as though I haven't got enough to be getting on with. Most of what I write is totally fictional. The only thing in my stories that's true to my real life is that I do have a very small penis like the mal...