by My Erotic Trail
Your poems are alway so evocative.
Thank you for sharing them with us.
I love the changes Art. You sprucingly
spiced this one up !! I love the rythm
and the imagery. Hot, and a bit deep
in places too. Keep'm coming,
for I see nothing wrong
with a bit of rhyme droppin' ~
Thinkin' I am gonna steal your muse
and have me a field day !!
*flowers* lol
not only interesting rhyming but also neat alliteration. well done.
wso
Losing his rhyme
Can feel so fine
That a man will love to do
Open verse incessantly.