All Comments on 'Lost and Found'

by Merrymaker

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flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Steamy fun

I love "sweat soaked sighs tunred inside out"! Very clever, Merry!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
*

Sizzles. I like that fresh line fly mentioned in his PC

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
Wow

this has a lot of meat to it while remaining mysterious

I liked this:

~Laid naked before probing eyes

Jaded Jane startled in explicit realization~

I just keep seeing someone naked on a banquet table.

I love the ending

Nice work

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 19 years ago
Too much fun

Steam rises from your words which you play, with the skill and rhythm of a great lover.

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