by Merrymaker
I love "sweat soaked sighs tunred inside out"! Very clever, Merry!
this has a lot of meat to it while remaining mysterious
I liked this:
~Laid naked before probing eyes
Jaded Jane startled in explicit realization~
I just keep seeing someone naked on a banquet table.
I love the ending
Nice work
Steam rises from your words which you play, with the skill and rhythm of a great lover.