by hottchic
knowing when to cut it short on the lists, and dealing a little less platitudes on the way.
I did not vote, you would not want to know what would have been the score.
You had some suggestions in your thread, you chose to ignore.
Right now for other reasons nothing to do with this site I am feeling really depressed right now.
I can see your point about the threads being too long but in the mood I am right now I am not sure that I have it in me to become good at writing poetry. I am very self doubting right now.
Good, I don't know about. Better for sure. Go back to thread in the poetry section. Read, Think about what Senna said. I don't agree with him 100% but its worth paying attention.
Best.
For someone who doesn't normally write poetry, you seem to be doing a bang up job of it.