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Listen Jennie, get your stuff where it belongs. We don't cotton to your stories making believe they are poems. Anyway, who can fault your obsessive structured details. You are a professional lyre, that is you have the same story to tell until it is muzac to our beers....Ha Ha--love ya, you slutty babe. If you are looking for a gold field to mine you is in da rung ladder. We is poo folk here.

will he ever finish what he couldnt start,,, TK U MLJ LV NV

I would love to put this sort of thing in a "short prose" category but since that sadly, doesn't exist here on Literotica, I must post short prose here because it is not long enough to be categorized as a "story" and thus must be put here in the poetry category. I do write actual poems as well but so far have not published any here on Literotica. I'm sure I will soon enough. Thanks for the love.