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deliciousthoughtsdeliciousthoughtsalmost 13 years ago
beautiful

beautiful, Ally, just beautiful.

Erika really must be an inspiring woman.

Lucky her. And lucky you.

kisses...

allyliterallyallyliterallyalmost 13 years agoAuthor
Thank you beautiful

If a beautiful person and a beautiful writer like you says it is beautiful, I must be doing something right.

Thank you.

passionfever2passionfever2almost 13 years ago
Beautiful and touching

Ally, what a beautiful poem. It shows how u truly feel and I agred with delicious thoughts.Erika must be some woman and i am jealous. I want someone like her to inspire me the way she had you.

idrubloodidrubloodover 11 years ago
Beautiful.

Very, very beautiful.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Ally, "This is Beautiful" Erika, is so lucky.

I have read your words over and over. You may not have written the original poem. No matter, the words are from your heart, the premise to the woman you love is from your heart. I can feel the love you have for Erika, in every word, on every line.

Thank You, for sharing your beautiful words.

Lynda.

(PS)

Ally, I am so jealous of you, and the beautiful way you can express your feelings, thoughts and emotions with words.

With your words you have described, the way I feel about Nichelle. All the things I would like to be able to tell her.

Not that I'm shy, I tell Nichelle, that I love her all the time. It's when I try to express my feelings, by writing something pretty for her. After writing I love you, the rest of my love poem to Nichelle, reads like a fucking grocery list.

Not beautiful like between, You and Erika.

I hope that you return and read this. Because this isn't from, "submissivepussylicker, lynda."

This is from, Me _ Lynda.

And Girls, Hugs and Kisses to the both of you.

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