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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Cute

The ending took me by surprise.

Curiouswife

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Love it!

Your ending gives new meaning to a luncheon special...

sacksackover 18 years ago
good effort.....

The "moan of spooning caramel" line is a bit awkward, and the build up toward the tag line is arguably too long, but this is cleverly executed otherwise, with a good sarcastic close!

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