All Comments on 'Madam Forewoman, What Say You?'

by thegirlfriday11

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TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
reminds me

of that " you are your own worst enemy" saying.

To much thinking and worrying.

In contrast to the others I like it this way

it says just enough ( to me) to let the reader draw their own conclusions and add their own story.

It creates the mood, but doesnt lead you down the path.

Something I enjoy

~shrug~

I like it

Thank you

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
Yipes, stripes!

At first I wondered if this was an acrostic.

Seeing as how it is not, I also think that it could be expanded.

WickedEveWickedEveabout 20 years ago
a little more

I think if there was a little more to this poem, it would help. As it is, I'm not quite sure what you're trying to get across. What you offer the reader seems to be part of a bigger poem that is missing.

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