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UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellover 3 years ago
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I love seeing enjambment in a poem but yours would have been easier to read if each line hadn't begun with a capital, so that it flowed seamlessly for the reader.

Mentioned in New Poems at [url=http://forum.literotica.com/newreply.php?do=newreply&noquote=1&p=93004099]New Poems[/url]

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Writing! Posting stories on literotica, longtime reader. Many stories were first posted on my website. Slowly editing them and posting them here. If you want more, https://www.wattpad.com/user/Hermanshermitage