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TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
wow

Perfect...a blend of great images and sensory triggers

you used some of the same words and combinations that I've often thought or used.

It made it all the more real to me

Great Work!

I hope to see more

Thank You

Senna JawaSenna Jawaabout 20 years ago
What a combination! :-)

straight porno + Hallmark poetry, wow!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
oh holy fuck

oh my god woman will you please please marry me?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
INCREDIBLY EROTIC

REALLY A BEAUTIFUL, AROUSING POEM! PURE MAGIC

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
what erotic poems can be

The poem's art took me into her head and body, the story made me desperate to be in his skin. Great vocabulary without sounding like a thesaurus.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Does it get much better? I think not

Yet again, simply incredible. What a talent.

zappymeisterzappymeisterabout 20 years ago
SWEET MELODY

this is a beautiful erotic poem. god must be nice to be so loved by such a woman

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