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sacksackabout 19 years ago
vivid imagery......

kind of cute and serious at the same time. Did you use "sharade" on purpose?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
love this verse

heart tied and tangled

swimming so many realms

amidst many fine words...that are tonal to me...love the melody of this...blue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
..........

Nothing to complain about here. This was excellent. I most definitely enjoyed!

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