All Comments on 'Michael's Song'

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Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Beautifully written

This was lovely descriptive

writing, wonderful visuals

and the imagery was stunning.

Frost settles like a comforting blanket

Icing the landscape with crystalline white

Sun rays reaching out from so far away

Relentless in futility in attempt to warm the earth

Simply beautiful,

Thank you.

~ Jenn

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
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Love the connections of nature and all that is... very visual and I know you worked hard on this powerful write.

du~

Mentioned in the Sunday reviews

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 19 years ago
Sweet~

Sometimes one reads words....

They stay with you all day... night.

This is a very powerful poem, I love it's wording, simplicity, flow, all of it~!!

Wonderful imagery, you painted a picture that withstands time... space...

A poem, one has to come back and visit, often...

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