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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
your

use of alliteration only strengthens the seduction and pull...ty..blue

champagne1982champagne1982about 18 years ago
Too much of a good thing?

I appreciate alliteration exercises, but you have a lot of repetitious sounds stacked one on the other, making it difficult to enjoy the way they roll off my tongue.

One person's view...

Carrie

TeeTeeTeeTeeabout 18 years ago
Mmmm...

Very nice seductive flow

thanks for the read

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