All Comments on 'Mint Creme Presuasion~'

"I release his denim cage"

oh I like that image a lot!

I enjoyed this read

Nice poem but I have to protest the use of chew, chewing, or chewed in an erotic poem. :)

"while I chewed his earlobe-"

I just think there shouldn't be any chewing during an intimate moment. No chewing, no slurping, no dribbling, etc. Though, I could really be missing out on something by not chewing. lol