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bluerainsabout 20 years agothis poem rings
a beautiful melody ...tis delightfully composed in harmony...thank you...bluerain
YDDabout 20 years agoGlassy-eyed
Wonderful closing stanza!
Well set up by those preceding!
The statement:
"I make the music
that tomorrows will hear"
is particularly strong,
and the tag phrase:
:the soft glass
that is time."
Makes me want to steal that thought,
and write it sixteen different ways!
Well done, and thank you!
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Ancient117331@Ancient117331Sigh, People tend to assume more often than not - sad, because they do it based on themselves and not on the other. My writes are me... If you want a clue - they are there to see. When you DO take the time to read and hear my thoughts behind your eyes... perhaps I won't see...
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