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by Midnight Angel
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ishtatabout 19 years agoBlack
I really like the idea behind this but it might be interesting if you precid the work as hard as you possibly could to make the poem as spare, gaunt and desperate as her condition.The whole work might then be a metaphor.
Anonymousabout 19 years ago*
I agree with ishtat.. the essence of the poem is very good but too wordy just the size of the stanzas and looking at them is overwhelming abundance and it is just the opposite of what I felt was the message of the work....
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