All Comments on 'Mixed Signals'

You've got a lot going on here. Most of it is very good. But to me the length and the shifting focus took away rather than added to the impact of each part. You could have easily divided your poem to two perhaps three poems edited each and still come with flying colors. You’ve got the internal debate about what's this guy is all about, you've got the physical seduction you've got the internal conflict about how to go about the situation (abstain or give in to lust) all, spread in different parts of the poem.

Even so, I can't say no to mixed pieces of art, even if there needs to be some order...