All Comments on 'Moist Invitation'

by EllieB

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Sman4444Sman4444almost 7 years ago
Wonderful Poem and Imagery

I didn't realize the feminine need for "liquid sensation" as part of sex/love making.

That gives me more insight into women - better late than never. It certainly makes sense now that I think about it. Seems like there's still so much to learn. I need more teachers! That's one reason I keep reading Literotica.

KingCuddleKingCuddleover 7 years ago
Can we do it again?

We sure can! Often will be good! :+))

debaucherdebaucherover 11 years ago
Beautiful

Your poem is the most sensual description of passionate lovemaking that I have ever read. Such a vivid imagery ... . Your words makes it seems like a deeply spiritual experience. I envy you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Wonderful!

Truly well done. Marvelous. Thanks for sharing that.

pierre4305pierre4305about 19 years ago
Poetry in Motion.

DearestEllie,

You certainly have a flair for the Erotic. Keep me, that is,it up.

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