All Comments on 'Monday's Child: My Vanishing Lover'

Loved the poem - you have really caught the moment.

I reckon that a big chunk of sex and especially illicit relationships is in the anticipation - so maybe that is why the highs seem to outweigh the lows.

Keep'em cumming

Sadly this lament is so true of many relationships. And the gender could very well be reversed.

What a gorgeously intense poem; beautiful & a little melancholy & yet bringing a whole range of emotions all in the one read! (I read it more than once) I think you might have/had the same ode-inspiring lover as me -- well, that is before he left, without a truthful word, or single glance-back... c'est la vie eh? & thankyou for the read

You summed up the feelings we often have as "ships in the night" perfectly! Thanks :)