All Comments on 'Morning'

is going to my favorites list.

I can see the whole thing...and it captures the humanity

of that house, that room so perfectly

Great word choices and placement

I really don't know what to say except Thank You

I agree with Tathagata on this. It is a lovely poem, gentle, and structurally very well accomplished. It's less than perfect, in my opinion, because of this broken feel it has, probably because of the missing articles. It flows, but there's something off.

One of the best of the day, nonetheless.

there's a beguiling and slightly sneaky cascade of events as a young child enters her day. Well done...

jim : )

I want to hug this poem.