by Magnum69
Nicely done! Soft and passionate, gently loving. Yet still erotic. You can't ask for more. Thank you.
Beautiful! You capture this tender moment perfectly
I enjoyed both of your poems today
'Ohhh' written from your perspective and 'Morning' from the outside looking in, both worked for me
In my head they belong together as a two part...an evenings much needed passion, followed by the next mornings gentle love making