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by Lillygirlx0x0

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wildsweetonewildsweetoneabout 17 years ago
Poetry Forum

I mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. Please feel free to come along and join in. Welcome to Literotica. - wildsweetone (the 50% temp rating is so that it will not affect other temp ratings)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
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I liked the rythm of this. You did that well.

-Curiouswife

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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An interesting piece of hard & soft erotica, with rhythm and rhyme softening the edges. Almost sounds like a structured cheer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
sweet

nice choice of words,liked the rhythm. after i read this my first impression was "that was sweet".those "ie" words give this poem that young feel.annay

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 15 years ago
Thanks for asking.

Don't mind if I do.

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I love to write, poems and short pieces. Reading erotica turns me on, so I thought I would take a stab. My first pieces on this site are a bit embarrassing, the grammar is lacking. But enjoy, hope you finish feeling steamy and hot. : )