All Comments on 'Morning Walk'

there are some Great lines in this:

~If I could only crush the sky with morter and pestle, I would.

I’d press it into little cakes,

and use it to draw you pictures of my day.~

and this:

~They seem to laugh as I walk past them in boots not slippers,

and peek at me shyly over the edges of their diamond fans.~

That is some great writing

I am going to add this to my favorites

that last verse........

whew

I'm jealous

Thank you for sharing

Almost perfect! The only line I question is the second, "Clomp, clomp on my feet." The double 'clomps' bother me a bit. Other than that I love the way each stanza has its own stand-alone thought yet builds to a whole with the others.

I don't do thermothingies

I love the portrayal of trees as shy debutantes. Wonderful poem, willow.

mentioned in today's reviews http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?s=&postid=10737310#post10737310

no thermometer reading