All Comments on 'Musical Roots or Curl Up and Dye'

But this I discern a sense of reason out of, your first sentence is some Damn powerful writing. Enjoyed this piece.

I'm glad that the work prompted a response!

I especially loved the line "I take pills to sustain sane." That'll go in my book of great lines.

thank you for your comments.I look forward to reading your work. I vote but rarely comment as often I cannot explain why I rate as such. I'll try harder.

This makes me think of that poem you submitted a few weeks ago, "I love you". At least, I think that was you. There is a lot going on beneath the words here, some strange metaphors. This is very open ended, and will confuse most readers, but you do have a frame in place. Some people will see it, I think. I'm not even sure I see it, though. Interesting and some really good lines in there. Thank you for the read.

'twas me. Folks hated that one. I don't blame 'em. Trite and silly.