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by darkdave
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twelveooneabout 16 years ago*
Good structure, varience of repeating lines, not good enough to overcome what is an extended cliche. A good question to ask your self is "does this seem like anything else?" Does "moonlight enraptured", "unbridled emotions" add anything new?
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