All Comments on 'My Body Trembles in Anticipation'

This little introduction to part 2 is actually quite brilliant. The language is all very proper and yet the last line is like a flower bursting into bloom. That you ended it there as the parfume of anticipation heats the readers body is a brilliant way of making the opening line of part 2 perfectly welcome. "My cunt gleams pink and shining" is a smooth opening to a poem where the reader has been so cleverly prepared by this poem. This opening would have grated without the preparation of part 1. Well done. These poems left my body tingling with delight.