All Comments on 'My Cavalier In Burnished Armature'

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UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellover 13 years ago
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You lose the meter on some of your lines and there is a typo on Romeo but the lines

'Come tap upon my portal,

And enter chambers sensuous.' are fun!

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