All Comments on 'My Cousin'

too wordy, cut the excess and retry. And you are right about incest, my brother and I started to have sex early on and continue to this day even though we are both married. I even suspect one of my kids is his.

ANNETTE GRACEY

I don't know what other signals your cousin might have sent or not have sent. The only clue is "I know you had a crush on me when we were young." That happens a lot in families but people grow out of it as they mature. Still, it's fun to imagine! You convey his reticence to take a chance amidst his desire which earns 5* from me.

Annette Gracey you sound like someone I'd like to meet! -- JB Edwards