All Comments on 'My Desire'

I couldn't decide how to vote, the anticipation was wonderful, but the final line was unexpected and a let down, lol.

However, the fun in it won me over.

Good work, Lil

Pete_

Great laugh! Did a great job teasing with that little twist at the end.

Thanks for the read, Dana

to falling into your trap. So want a little cream in your coffee.....This was more stimulating than caffeine. ;)

What a great poem to read while drinking a cup of hot coffee on a cold October morning. What a great twist to throw in at the end!

That was good, if you need some non-dairy creamer I feel all wet.

Oh yes, you delicious tease;

I'm in the kitchen right now

fixing you a special blend~~~~~~