by thedogman77004
Wild! I love it! :)
I'd like to recommend being careful of the caps. in the sentences, and over punctuating. Other than that, super job!
I loved it!!! You Texas boys, I tell you... ready to pack the van and off I go...this was a fun ride babe..Caps and use of some rhetoric could be cleaned up, but hell sex is messy sometimes lol.. so that fits right in with this write HA!... ty for the ride..
du~
your poem was mentioned in the Sunday reviews..