All Comments on 'My Lady of Sighs'

by demure101

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
5ed

new readers pay attention to the end rhyme, the sound of..., last stanza

My stiff Madonna, made of wood.

wood

almost like a resolution in music

this is one of the reasons i keep saying go through new poems get face to face with the good bad and the ugly, you'll learn some new things

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THOSE LADIES WHOSE COUNTENANCE

has power and control from far beyond. TK U MLJ LV NV

DawnJDawnJover 11 years ago
Painful...

...both to read and to imagine! :(

As usual, you've exhibited great elegance and restraint in the presentation of this terrible thing that is unrequited love.

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