All Comments on 'My Love'

by RhymeFairy

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
From the Queen of Eros

A call for surrender

that sounds so like triumph;

RF's presence here, so commanding

pulls, ensnares, envelops

And having once tasted her

makes you thirsty for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
very soulful

and pleading...what love could deny such power...thanks ....blue

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
passion in words

~ poetry <grin> nice write Ryhme, you share your heart and soul with so many. We are called blessed <grin> ty

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenover 18 years ago
No man in his right mind...

would turn down such a sensual invitation! This was the lure of lust, so deliciously described with phrases like,

"Inhale all that I am. I have already,

inhaled you. Tasted hot silky sexiness,

just dripping, from your manliness.

Dined on erotica delight, desserts

puddingly ... sweet. Spread fit for

a queen, your queen of the night."

Once he hears that, he won't be hungry for you - he will be famished! <wink> Loved the wording from start to finish, Queen Hottie!

Vixxx

bigntenderbigntenderover 18 years ago
puddingly ... sweet

Every man should have a queen like this to love him like this. How can it be any more special than this. It all just flowed as one thought. Love, devotion, passion....

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