by herecomestherain
ah come on how can I be the first to comment on this! Intelligent and sexy. I like it!
are either too subtle to be erotic or too vulgar. This walks the line between the two very well. Clever and well done.
This is a fun, compelling poem.... The Title intrigued, and I like the way it developed its allure, its suggestiveness, eliciting (or should it be illiciting?) in its last two stanzas my joyful appreciation of its wit and style.
I can't do poetry and so feel under-qualified attemping to review it but I loved this. It painted a picture in my mind and didn't scream loudly at me but beckoned softly, wow, I think I just managed to say how I felt about a poem I liked, YIPPEE!!!!
You turn a phrase well, particularly liked the last stanza. Neat little poem!