All Comments on 'My Slave ~'

by RhymeFairy

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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You are so bad;

even without a picture,

can see the chain in you hand;

controlling, guiding,

a well trained

slave

Venus InferenceVenus Inferenceover 18 years ago
put on your dress, your face is a mess

tsk tsk, silly rabbit. i can see you've let your imagination run away with your manners. it's time you were tamed.

Man RayMan Rayover 18 years ago
A little...

A little `switching` is always good for the soul! Nice images...

bigntenderbigntenderover 18 years ago
Can i be your Pet?

i won't leave a mark.

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
love this bit...

Now,

my Boy Toy. You

may worship again, at

Salvations' Gate. This

time, make me cum!

****

overall nicely done......don

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
WELL ... DAYUM !

somewhere between the thighs, i lost my words, now i can only utter in silence.... awe'd me ... -sGp-

im_invisible69im_invisible69over 18 years ago
When?

Your poetry is so diverse and fun. I love the imagry in this one...so when should I be there? ;)

TrollyTrollyover 18 years ago
From Under the Bridge

Do you touch yourself when you read the comments from the mutual stroking society? Give me a break. There is so little true poetry on this site. My Gawd. . . .

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