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I like tales in poetry and this was obviously pain stakenly written with a lot of visuals and rhyme. Nice write (~_~) I am curious about "sais" I'll look it up but it seems to me it should be says, enlighten me <grin a lot of time and effort in this poem and it shows tremendously.

This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.