All Comments on 'My World'

when you put drinking, eating and inner being that close together my sexual hunger arose <grin?>

wonderful poem LilDarlin

Beautiful poem. You have feeling which shines through your work. Keep writing.

I liked it. I have to say that I don't even give a second glance to anything that is noted 'erotic poetry'. In reading the academy thread, I saw you received a nod on this poem and decided to check it out. I liked it, lady. I suspect you are no virgin, lady... I liked it.

this is a really good poem. although, i would like to know how to get to that world. sounds great!

Your world of words;

melting and melding into

the world of the real;

where does one end

and the other begin?