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by Carletto47

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Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
How does one....?

Watch faster? your story-line(s) are quite good, but sometimes as we quicken the pace to capture our thoughts, we loose sight of how those assemblies of nouns, verbs, and adjectives translate.... Thanks for sharing....

HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago
think there may need to be a comma after watch

I watch, faster

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