All Comments on 'Nairobi Duet'

by demure101

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Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
Wonderful visuals

Your writing makes it seem like I am right there seeing with you - but I think you show me more than I would have seen by myself. Wonderful, Demure.

HarryHillHarryHillover 10 years ago
Haunting in it's (detached?) observation

reminds me of my gone down piece, a sense of loss/despair

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
Would echo Oldbear , Dem : U make us see something

More !! 5-ed .

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