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among Davy Jones' realms. TK U MLJ LV NV

This is one I wish I had written myself. Loved it from the first lines - the phrases a school of fish in bright water (one normally expects bright fish, not water) and 'swam through a hole in your eye' ( one normally thinks of an eye in a socket, this turns it around) set the tone and you continued it throughout the poem. The rhyme in the three final lines ties it all together. Brava!

I particularly liked "as the moon tugged at our sleep".