by spikesbint
who criticize and yet wont admit to who they are.
I was always brought up if didn't like something say nothing...if you opened your mouth you'd better be prepared to show you could do better.
I loved it
I thought it very erotic and I love the use of " honey"
As for the last 2 lines...yes...that's exactly the feeling.
Well done
: )
one man's erotica is another man's bible...youre on a porn site, why are you surprised at what you read?
keep on writing, sb!!!