- Non-Erotic Poetry
- New Beginnings
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Click herespring's blossoms
bring new beginnings
magically transforming barren
into bountiful
life overflows
germinating beauty
for all to behold
bright sunny days
moments to savor
tucked away for
a rainy day's memories
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 17 years agoThis joy of Spring, it's out there, somewhere, I hope. The day before Easter and it's snowing today. We'll have more snow on the ground than on Christmas.
Amyfriendabout 17 years agoand created pretty images but the choice of the word "barren" in my mind was wrong. "Barren" is totally unproductive land (rocky, stony ground etc.) not to be confused with a field that has laid fallow i.e. crops not planted that year. Also its the seeds that germinate not the beauty although the later results are beautiful. The rest I really liked.
BOSTONFICTIONWRITERabout 17 years agoBy some of the comments, most of the readers were in a bad mood or woke up on the wrong side of the bed or have not had any in a while.
I'm in a great mood, it is bright and sunny here, and I got laid last night.
I only wished the poem was longer. Good job.
My Erotic Trailabout 17 years ago...seems that he doesn't like too many poems so don't take his comments to heart! (~_~)
MyNecroticSnailabout 17 years agonot corny, trite. And it's triteness is ruined by
"germinating beauty"
Anonymousabout 17 years agoSorry, but I guess I'm the only one who finds this a little, well, corny....
My Erotic Trailabout 17 years agospring forward and fall back... I am so glad that spring is back... nice write, especially while shooting from the hip.
RhymeFairyabout 17 years agoa very sensual feel to it. Love your imagey mixed with such clever paint ... Very good, in my book ~
BOSTONFICTIONWRITERabout 17 years agoYes, I can see that I am not the only one glad that Winter is soon over.
