by RazzRajen
and the movenment. If that's the point great stuff. But I need some help understanding what you're saying- call me thick, or dense. (just don't call me late for dinner) :)
...always enjoy watching Razz play with his words and this is no exception. Some great alliteration and well chosen lines.
especially:
I love the living
dreams that happen
in pink glows,
lit by saffire
brimstone Taken
riven to the core
...on here, capture things perfectly in your unique way. Enjoyed this, read it more than once.