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by Senna Jawa

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
the point

is to buy a better calender

I don't know if Snap-on-tools still puts them out...

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greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 10 years ago

I liked how the last line appears to be a cynical statement in the form of a question for some and for others one that invites a positive response. It made me think how we often go looking for data that support our prior assumptions.

pelegrinopelegrinoover 10 years ago

the point is getting older.

Senna JawaSenna Jawaover 10 years agoAuthor
:-)

Thank you g-m for your reading (makes me feel like writing another poem).

Pelegrino, think about the meaning of the word "point" in the given context (and don't me "sir, I know it" :-). Triviality is alien to my poem.

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
the final line

had a cynical, or despairing lilt for me as a reader, a look at the inevitable, a shrug of the shoulders and asking the question what's the point?

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