All Comments on 'Nightfall'

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DawnJDawnJabout 11 years ago
Brilliant!

I love the images, both visual and aural. I'm particularly struck by " a pendulum

stuck in the outswing", and the idea of the Moon flat on her back is not without intent, I'm sure! Naughty...but nice!

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
in a poem

with the same subject matter

TRIPLE tsk

laughs

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
a minor seventh?

and you did not hear

the flatted fifth in mine

and correct me with some bullshit about negatives, tsk,tsk

i 5ed anyway

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