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All Comments on 'Nightly Ritual'

by irishcatsmeow

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lostandfounderlostandfounderalmost 20 years ago
Nice...

a good poem. Could use a little better flow in my opinion, but it does draw you into the water. Good Work!

Favorite line

"A holy escape"

Could be read two or three different ways, all work great within the poem.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Amen

This feels good! Very relaxing.

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