All Comments on 'No fairytale'

like a slightly cracked song, but in line 9, I would "heaven" decline and move to line 8 without further debate. xo

Not quite sure what that means lol but I just fashioned it as a parody of 'Fairytale of New York' and followed the line placings of that

much less their lyrics so I don't know what images/phrases were used.

in the spirit of commenting more, I would say (disclaimer) that the first few lines detract from the build up and crescendo of a hell of a party, and rugby match apparently. enjoyed it. :)

ceni vedi suffragium (or something)

done

5ed

Thanks for the freshening up, more so for leaving a link in PoBo to the song.