All Comments on 'No More'

Hi ya "Lil D" ...you told me this was kinda sad. The topic was BUT...the fact that you chose a real fact of life to write about impresses me. It's by the sad things that we grow. You expressed true emotions and feelings in your poem and one has to be able to do that to get readers. Great job...now make me a HAPPY smile...do another one. XOXOX's.........Shay

Have felt this loss in my heart before and will again...loved the simple things..car wash... the little things that really make love...

Lil...

I've gotta admit, I never expected a poem so touching and so melancholy from someone who always seems to have such a smile on her face. Just a solemn reminder I guess that we all know what those feelings of heartache, pain, and desolation are.

I'm very impressed with this first submission of yours. Please keep writing - I always enjoy reading poems and stories of people I hang out with... it helps to see what's underneath the surface.

Great work, Lil!!!

-Kenny (Cummybear)

When I get an IM from TX about a post, I know I BETTER check it out or face the wrath. She has not disappointed me yet. You definetly touched the good things. I look forward to more writings Lil Darlin. By any chance you in TX? Scott ( go_slow_maybe )

LilDarlin, I only hope that you didn't experience what happen in this poem. I read parts of it with tears in my own eyes and some with smiles as it remaniced, like washing the car and bubbles on the bath room floor. It was a sad poem but so real that it could happen to any of us. Your poem was well worth waiting for. Huggggssssssss, Minnie

Lil...this is wonderfully heartwrenching and introspective. I love it and it is a most excellent first posting. Bravo, Lil!!

i know who it is about and it is so fantastic to the heart it went ~~~one~~~~

once again a wonderful portrait of love lost and longing desire your words are amazing lil