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Click hereAlways One I thought we would be.
Now I can see you are not here.
I look around our room in tears,
and want you here with me.
My heart is broken forever shattered...
My soul is so empty without you in its place.
Wanting you, longing for you.
Needing you for every breathe I take.
You were my love forever more.
Always together we agreed.
Now you’re gone.
Moved on, and I am here picking up the pieces.
My mind is numb. Eyes so desolate.
My lips are dry. Mouth is so deserted.
My shoulders long for those wonderful hands.
No more smiles, that make me melt...
No more sighs, and moans for our love.
My hands are no longer caressing your oh so fine body.
My heart is so filled with hurt, sadness and need...
I arch into you no more...
Wanting, needing your love...
Our bodies do not meet together as one...
Oh how alone I am, needing you..
No more laughing, smiling, and loving.
Our place on the beach is forever bare...
The trees and flowers are without a care.
No dancing among the stars.
No washing that silly car.
No more hot bubble baths.
Our hands caressing, lips sucking,
hips grinding , us loving.
Bubbles all over the floor.....
My heart cries out.
My soul so alone.
No longer one forever.
Together no more.
Oh my eyes are crying...
My soul is weeping...
No more us.
No more one.
No more love.
Forever yes,
Forever gone.
No more~
- COMMENTS
Nevadamanover 19 years agoonce again a wonderful portrait of love lost and longing desire your words are amazing lil
Anonymousover 19 years agoi know who it is about and it is so fantastic to the heart it went ~~~one~~~~
Kismet In Tnover 19 years agoLil...this is wonderfully heartwrenching and introspective. I love it and it is a most excellent first posting. Bravo, Lil!!
Minnie(virgin)over 19 years agoLilDarlin, I only hope that you didn't experience what happen in this poem. I read parts of it with tears in my own eyes and some with smiles as it remaniced, like washing the car and bubbles on the bath room floor. It was a sad poem but so real that it could happen to any of us. Your poem was well worth waiting for. Huggggssssssss, Minnie
Anonymousover 19 years agoWhen I get an IM from TX about a post, I know I BETTER check it out or face the wrath. She has not disappointed me yet. You definetly touched the good things. I look forward to more writings Lil Darlin. By any chance you in TX? Scott ( go_slow_maybe )
cummybearover 19 years agoLil...
I've gotta admit, I never expected a poem so touching and so melancholy from someone who always seems to have such a smile on her face. Just a solemn reminder I guess that we all know what those feelings of heartache, pain, and desolation are.
I'm very impressed with this first submission of yours. Please keep writing - I always enjoy reading poems and stories of people I hang out with... it helps to see what's underneath the surface.
Great work, Lil!!!
-Kenny (Cummybear)
Anonymousover 19 years agoHave felt this loss in my heart before and will again...loved the simple things..car wash... the little things that really make love...
Sweet_Shayover 19 years agoHi ya "Lil D" ...you told me this was kinda sad. The topic was BUT...the fact that you chose a real fact of life to write about impresses me. It's by the sad things that we grow. You expressed true emotions and feelings in your poem and one has to be able to do that to get readers. Great job...now make me a HAPPY smile...do another one. XOXOX's.........Shay
