All Comments on 'No Naked Inhibitions'

Nice work! 5 --Great talent. I wonder if the last stanza might be improved by a slight alteration. The 'self-imposed locks' does not fit the rhyme scheme. 'let lose our shouts?' I'm trying to work in your lines but maybe you have a better rhyme? You might also remove 'naked.' Love your art!!!!

In this dance of life, let's shed our doubts,

Embrace the unknown, remove our self-imposed locks.

No longer bound, we'll reach new heights and positions,

In the freedom of being, with no naked inhibitions.