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by kittyblack

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
I liked this one too

Am enjoying your writing. Looking forward to more. The only suggestion I have is to use "and" instead of &.

-Curiouswife

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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Very fine also; sparse and vivid imagery, though I concur with that other comment about the use of the ampersand — better to use 'and' instead.

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